After a chat with tutor Justin, I have made some revisions to the Benjamin sketches.
Firstly Justin felt the black mourning outfit needed breaking up. There
are restrictions on our colour palette because of the narrative, so I
have kept to a range of greys. The red-and-white bow tie is necessary to
Justin also felt the original boots were "wrong": too stubby and rounded, so I have revised these using reference material.
Justin suggested making the coat tails long to help make Benjamin's
clothes look too large, but I'm not sure about this, I think it makes it
a bit too comical.